To integrates my paper, the most important thing is to make each body paragraph connects to the main thesis. General information and specific elaborations, make my points clear and easy to understand.
Safiya Asked:
-What’s your essay about?
Basically it’s about Internet change human’s life.
-How do you plan to integrates your introduction to your essay.
My introduction concerns about people become more familiar with Avatar sites, YouTube.
Yael Asked:
-What are your academic sources?
Most of them from websites, like google search.
-What are the ideas your pointing at?
The first body paragraph is giving some specific reasons to point out author’s unclear issues. Then elaborate my personal experiences about Avatar sites and YouTube.
-What message are you trying to send your essay?
Let readers recognize how Internet changes our life style.
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