Evaluation

First of all, Safiya declares author’s main point, and she disagreed author’s assumption, which is saying that American tuned out the issues around them in exchange for a video camera and a whole lot of time on their hands. Then she gave some evident about Sony didn’t make enough PS3 last year. After that, she mentioned the Global warming, she though author gave the false statement because some people really try hard to prevent the environment (Oprah and Al Gore). Then she point out the issue that author said American do not seems to care about the war oversea. She gave the reason that most Americans want the troops back and they disagree with Bush Administration action, and also the public support for the war has decreased.
In my personal view, I think this is pretty good paper. She gave many arguments, but do not have a specific one though the whole essay. For each argument, she did provide evident to her option and these statements are clear, easy to understand. If she can make more elaborations about one issue and clear thesis, that paper will be great.
Safiya, she did the face book. She is freshman of Queens College. She loves playing soccer, studying and baking. She came from Trinidad and Tobago, so she loves Jazz, and R&B music. She posted her picture on her profile, and I think she is a pretty open person; even she is quiet in the class.